Rework

Reworking this one, since the figures in the last were so stiff and awkward I couldn't stand it. The hard thing about reworking a painting, even a terrible one, is that you do lose the small parts you did love in the last. Here's a snapshot of the beginning of the new figures, and my favorite details of its previous life

new composition sketch vs. the old one. Haha my professor says part of why I get lost so often in painting is because my mock up sketches are so incomplete. I only do the interesting part, and then paint the interesting part, and then am at a loss with what to do with the rest of it